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Post by Namine on Mar 14, 2005 11:09:19 GMT -5
The Locked Heart By: Namine
It was a dark night, no stars to pierce this darkness. Something was up, and Riku and Sora both knew this. Nothing was right on this island anymore....
Chapter One; The Journey Shall Begin...
Riku stood on his island, watching the sea boil in an evil rage... He gave a small sigh. "When will this all end?" He asked the night air aloud. "Soon..." said a voice from behind him. He turned around, startled. "Who's there?" He asked, glaring at the shadows of the night. "You'll soon find out your destiny. Everything begins here..." the voice said once more. But this time, out from the shadows came a hooded figure. Riku stepped back. "There is no need for alarm... Young Riku.." Riku's eyes widened. It was not only that the figure knew his name, but that the voice was no longer deep, but the mysterious voice that of a female. "Who are you...?" He asked. "They call me by many names... But you may call me Namine..." The figure took two gloved hands to her hood, and pulled it down. The girl, Namine, had a pale, almost white face, a blindfold, and short black hair with silverish bangs off to the side of her face. "What... the...?" Riku said.. confussed. "I'm going to be staying on this island." Namine said, voice no more mysterious, "But, I cannot be kept a secret. Tomorrow, you shall show me the one you all call Sora..."
End Chapter One
Author's Note: So, how'd I do for a first time fanfic. Short chapter, I know, but I liked it a bit. ^-^; Yes, Riku is going to be a 'main' character... ^-^
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Post by Namine on Mar 14, 2005 20:32:34 GMT -5
The Locked Heart By: Namine
When battles of the heart begin, it's wither the darkness wins, or is concealed. Everything in this world may be in a battle of it's own...
Chapter Two; The Living Doll of Darkness
The next day, Riku sat up in bed, trying to recall the events of the day prior. Let's see... Sora hit me in the head with a coconut... I beat him in a sword fight, and... Ugh.. my head....... hurts? Riku looked down at the floor to see the figure of a girl. He screamed. "OH MY GOD! WHAT THE...." He paused... "Oh yeah, Namine..." The girl stirred, rolling over on her side. Riku sighed. "Better wake Namine up.." he said, "But not before getting dressed.." He got up, and got dressed. "Unh..." Namine groaned, rolling over again. Riku sighed once more. "She sleeps like a rock! It's as if she's a... doll..." He bent down next to her, face very close to hers. He slowly untied the blindfold. I'm sorry if this was a secret, but I need to know... He gasped when he looked. Her eyes were the color of blood, and she was blind, sleeping with her eyes open. "Oh..." He said, dropping the blindfold. Namine stirred, then sat up. "Oh, hello Riku..." She said, giving a slight smile. Riku just stared. "Is... something..." Then it hit her. "You didn't...." She said, bringing her hands up to her eyes. "Im sorry..." He said, eyes averting their gaze to the floor. "It's alright, you were bound to find out anyways..." She said, picking up the blindfold. "And it's no big deal, I can see. Even though I am blind, I've gained somewhat of a second sight." Riku stood up, holding out a hand to help her up. Namine accepted this, and hoisted herself to her feet. "Would Sora be up at this hour?" She asked, forgetting the closeness between Riku and herself. "Uh.. y-yeah.." He stammered, his face burning. "I need to speak with him." She said cooly. "Oh, o-okay.." He said, finally letting go of Namine's hand, and stepping back.
End Chapter Two
Author's Note: Yeah, I had nothing better to do, and next chapter, I will introduce Sora. Also, if anyone wants a character of their's in this fic, please Private Message me, and I'll consider it! X3
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Post by Namine on Mar 19, 2005 23:05:04 GMT -5
The Locked Heart By: Namine
Treat her good, why? Didn't you know? Dolls have a life of their own too, you know...
Chapter Three; Meeting the Fated one...
It had taken a very short time for Namine to change. All she did was take her cloak off to reveal the outfit underneath. They were now walking side by side on the shore, looking for Sora. "So.. from your description... He has brown hair, blue eyes.. and he's lazy?" Namine said, breaking the calm silence between the two. Riku nodded. "That's Sora, alright..." He said, staring at his feet. Namine grasped his hand, hearing his sadness. She smiled at him, and he smiled back. "Well, who is this? Riku's got himself a girl!" Yelled a voice. They turned their heads to see the one described as Sora laying ontop of the shack. "I'm Sora.." He said, yawning, after jumping off the shack. "Namine.." She said quietly. They all smiled...
End Chapter Three
Author's Note: Short chapter, written at 11:00 at night..
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Post by Namine on Mar 20, 2005 16:14:45 GMT -5
The Locked Heart By: Namine
Fear comes from the deapths of your own heart. So does the darkness... Fight it...
Chapter Four; Ironic things happen...
It had been one whole hour from the first meeting with Sora. Riku had gone to get his sword, and Sora just dissappeared, so Namine sat on the top of a coconut tree, head resting on her hands, feet dangling from the top of the tree.
She heard the clanking of a sword below, the clashing of wood against wood. She sighed, staring at the sky, her eyes seeing the darkness overhead. She squinted her eyes, and saw two yellow eyes peering back at her. She then felt herself falling through the warm air of Destiny Island.
Riku was facing off against Tidus, Selphie, and Wakka, when they hear a splash. He turns her head.
"Hey man, that was da new chick on the island, ya?" Wakka said, holding the blitzball on his shoulder.
"Yeah, and she just fell from that tree!" Tidus yelled.
"Oh no!" Selphie squealed, "She might drown if she lands in deep enough water!"
Riku threw his sword behind him, running into the ocean. He saw no signs of Namine's body. Oh no... She couldn't have.. drowned? He turned his head, to actuially see her standing, facing the ocean, soaking wet.
As Riku walked closer, she slowly turned around, a twisted smile upon her face.
"The darkness is coming..." Namine said in that same voice as she had when they first met.
"Darkness...?" Riku felt a pain in his heart, and fell to his knees, clutching his chest.
"It is your destiny, young warrior... Seek out ultimate truth, and remember... to Forget forgetting..." Namine said, her smile becoming more like her own kind features once more.
"Nothing... is right on this island anymore!" Namine said, lifting a hand. "The darkness will get you, and that's when we shall meet again.." She said, dissappearing....
End Chapter Four
Author's Note: Another chapter up! I'd really like replies, please.. ^-^;
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Post by Namine on Mar 25, 2005 18:42:24 GMT -5
The Locked Heart By: Namine
The smell of blood filled hte noses of the ones who prove innocent. The Darkside arose, kill of the living... And adding to the Dead...
Chapter Five; The Darkside
Riku know what he had to do.. Or.. More so, the darkness in his heart did..
He ran to his island, sprinting as fast as he could. He heard voices.. Small, insane voices in his head. Wanting control.. The darkness was winning...
As he slowed his pace, he remembered what Namine had said... Was she, too, a child of the Darkness? Was she, too, destined to bring destruction to this world as they knew it?
...And she smirked, from the shadows she watched. Namine was watching the Young Riku, following the path to destruction...
"Burn... And lead this world to it's own little Death!" She said in a low hiss..
As Riku sank into darkness, Namine turned away, a twisted smile upon her face....
End Chapter Five
Author's Note: Whee! It's short becuase I wrote this chaprter while Mother Dearest was getting her nails done.. And there was an open computer.. ^^;
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Post by Namine on Mar 30, 2005 16:03:30 GMT -5
The Locked HeartBy: Namine Arise, Arise, thy servant of the dark... And be sure to bring back thy of pure heart... Chapter Six; Watashi wa...This chaos went on, and on... and on. In the End, Riku locked himself away, Sora and new companyleft, and Namine remained a ailent Enigma.. No one knew what had become of her... Until now... [Four Years Later]A hooded black figure walked along the endge of the black waters that were once pure. It was the ruined shore of Destiny Island, where the Keyblade Master was chosen. " It's been so long..." Said a deep voice. "THERE YOU ARE!" Yelled another voice, this one of a boy. He, too, was also hooded in a black cloak. The other figure shook it's head. "Tyke... How long have you been searching?" The figure asked, it's voice now light, and barely hearable by human ears. "Shi-chan... You know why! And how long!" The boy, Tyke said. The other figure chuckled lightly. "Of course I know.." It smiled under the hood. "We have another one, he was said to be locked away for a very long time in the Kingdom of Hearts." Tyke said. "Shizuka, he's looking for the 'Guardian' as he said." Shizuka brought her hood down, hair black and down to her jawline and in the back a long, thin, ponytail. Her eyes hidden by a blindfold. "Heh.. It's been a while since we've had another." Shizuka said. Tyke lifted his hood down. Her had sapphire blue eyes, and spiky blonde hair. "Should I bring him to you?" Tyke inquired. "...Yes." Shizuka said, turning to face the blackened waters. Tyke ran off. You turn around... Seeing the ruined Island, pieces of board lay untouched for years, and no plant life was to be seen. It wasn't long until Tyke returned, with a blindfolded boy with silver hair. "Hello.. I'm known as Shizuka." Shizuka said, facing the boy "...Riku." Said the silver haired boy. Shizuka just smiled. "You're native to thins land. You're searching for your loved one, and... The Guardian born Child of Darkness.." "...." He said nothing. "Tyke.." Shizuka says. He snaps his head up, looking at her. "Show him to his island." Tyke nods, and walks off with Riku. "It's been so long... Dearest Riku.. It's good to know someone hasn't forgotten..." Shizuka smiled into the sky. End Chapter SixAuthor's Note: ... -Sigh- Nothing to write... That was a waste... But I guess you all know who Shizuka is XD And Tyke is BHK, I just call him Tyke for some reason..
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Post by Sanjii on Apr 4, 2005 0:54:28 GMT -5
I like it! Could you manage to squeeze in Sanjii?
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Post by Namine on Apr 4, 2005 18:30:06 GMT -5
O'course! n_n; It's a bit more.. darkish, and I might twist the personality a bit.. Or try not to and accidentially do, but yes, and she'll still be Sora's soulmate if you want n.n
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Post by Namine on Apr 10, 2005 8:31:48 GMT -5
The Locked HeartBy: Namine People meet, and people part, I'm afraid..-Tatsuhiko Shido; NightWalker Chapter Seven; The Witch of Frozen HeartShizuka wandered the island silently. She needed time to think.. To clear her head. Riku had returned to the island.. And it took four years from the Day of Judgement. Shizuka shook her head, black hair flying everywhere. Her blindfold still stuck in it's proper spot over her eyes. Tyke was with Riku, showing him around the ruins. The then caught up with Shizuka. " Tuach'd caas mega ra nasaspanc drec bmyla..." Tyke said. This caused Riku to blink. They were speaking another language.. One that he had never heard. " Sasuno mucc, po dra fyo ed caasc. Aedran dryd, un ra tuach'd fyhd du nasaspan." Shizuka replied. " Oui tu ghuf fa'na luhvicehk dra buun puo, nekrd?" Tyke said, shaking her head. This caused Shizuka to laugh slightly. " Ymfyoc biddehk udranc pavuna ouincamv.. Rara" Shizuka said, smiling Shizuka, Tyke, and a very confussed Riku were sitting at the shore of the dark ocean. ...There was a violent, cold wind blowing now. "It's a bit cold, isn't it?" Shizuka asked, smiling. "You're crazy.." Riku said, "Saying that with a smile." Tyke laughed. "She might be crazy, but she's right. It's cold." "Show yourself, young witch.." Shizuka said, standing up. Wind blew, and the waves of the ocean blew up into a very violent tidal wave. The wave subsided, and there sat on a spray of water was a female figure, with a toga-like garnment. The hair was like ice blue, and the skin was pale white. " Tyke, ed'c yh Yauh! Ed syo hud muug ed, pid ed ec! Calina dra ynay!" Shizuka yelled again in that odd language. Tyke nodded, running off. Riku stood up. "Okay.. This should be interesting.." Shizuka said with a smirk. Before she could summon her weapon... The figure stood up on the spray of water, and held out it's hand. A large wave, a miniature Tsunami, rammed into Shizuka. The Figure smirked... And something within Riku snapped... And someone in the shadows took action... End Chapter SevenAuthor's Note: Yes, Tyke and Shizuka are speaking Al Bhed. ^^; I'm obsessed with that language. And anyways, I'll be adding Sanjii in shortly. As in Next Chapter wise.
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Post by Serenity on Apr 10, 2005 15:42:13 GMT -5
((Hehe, I didnt know you had your fanfic here! Hehe. I gotta remember to read it later. I'd do it now but I dont think I've got time lol))
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Post by Namine on Apr 10, 2005 16:35:25 GMT -5
Hehe. It's okay, but thanks for considering to read it! ^_^
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Post by Serenity on Apr 10, 2005 19:43:28 GMT -5
i would've sooner if i had knoowwwn XD lol
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I'm alone in the world, I can't even find myself in....your eyes
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Post by BrokenInside on Apr 11, 2005 13:36:25 GMT -5
I really liked it I thought it was VARY good, maybe I need to put up my fanfic.
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Post by Zefii on Apr 11, 2005 16:10:37 GMT -5
I like it keep up the good work!
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Post by Namine on Apr 11, 2005 20:10:13 GMT -5
Thanks. And the thing is.. I don't think.. I just write. XD
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