Post by Raiku on Jul 3, 2005 15:50:29 GMT -5
Hi. This is a little fan fic that I wrote... it's not done yet but here is the first part:
Genre: Action, Fantasy, Comedy, Drama
Simple and Clean
Prologue
Adoption
Axel walked along on the beach of Deep Dive. He was supposed to meet the Glowing Eye Unknown (We'll call him GEU for now) on the beach. Then, Axel heard a strange cry.
"WWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!
"
Axel ran towards the cry. When he got to the cry all he found was a basket. And in that basket was a baby. There was a note by the baby's head. Axel opened the letter.
'Who ever finds this note, please take care of our baby girl.'
That was what the note said. Then, Axel turned his head toward the ocean. He saw a large boat being attacked by an army of Heartless. He picked up the baby and ran. Finally, he got to where the GEU and the Enigmatic man were talking.
"He looks just like you." said the Enigmatic Man
"It's all coming back to me... the truth..." said the GEU
"Sir!" called Axel
GEU and the Engimatic Man turned to Axel.
"There are swarms of Heartless! In the ocean!" screamed Axel
The three Unknowns ran to where the baby was found. The Heartless were climbing and destroying the boat. The Unknowns took out their weapons and, literally, ran on water. One by one, the Unknowns destroyed the Heartless.
Later that evening, Axel explained everything about the baby and the note. The GEU found the baby fast asleep and holding a moonlit charm bracelet with a sun on it.
"I see... Tyren's child right?" asked GEU
"It seems so." replied Axel
"Raiku..." GEU silently said to himself
"Huh?" asked Axel
"We will call her Raiku." said the GEU walking away with the baby
To be continued...
That's all I got so far... it's not much really. It'll be a comedy genre in farther chapters.
Genre: Action, Fantasy, Comedy, Drama
Simple and Clean
Prologue
Adoption
Axel walked along on the beach of Deep Dive. He was supposed to meet the Glowing Eye Unknown (We'll call him GEU for now) on the beach. Then, Axel heard a strange cry.
"WWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!
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Axel ran towards the cry. When he got to the cry all he found was a basket. And in that basket was a baby. There was a note by the baby's head. Axel opened the letter.
'Who ever finds this note, please take care of our baby girl.'
That was what the note said. Then, Axel turned his head toward the ocean. He saw a large boat being attacked by an army of Heartless. He picked up the baby and ran. Finally, he got to where the GEU and the Enigmatic man were talking.
"He looks just like you." said the Enigmatic Man
"It's all coming back to me... the truth..." said the GEU
"Sir!" called Axel
GEU and the Engimatic Man turned to Axel.
"There are swarms of Heartless! In the ocean!" screamed Axel
The three Unknowns ran to where the baby was found. The Heartless were climbing and destroying the boat. The Unknowns took out their weapons and, literally, ran on water. One by one, the Unknowns destroyed the Heartless.
Later that evening, Axel explained everything about the baby and the note. The GEU found the baby fast asleep and holding a moonlit charm bracelet with a sun on it.
"I see... Tyren's child right?" asked GEU
"It seems so." replied Axel
"Raiku..." GEU silently said to himself
"Huh?" asked Axel
"We will call her Raiku." said the GEU walking away with the baby
To be continued...
That's all I got so far... it's not much really. It'll be a comedy genre in farther chapters.